Bên cạnh hướng dẫn Phân tích đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 WRITING TASK 1 (map)"The plans show a school library 5 years ago and the same library now"(kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề 🔥"Describe a promise you made"IELTS SPEAKING PART 2,3: Bài mẫu kèm từ vựng
I. Đề bài
Describe a promise you made.
- What the promise was
- To whom you made it
- If it was easy/difficult to keep
- Why you made it
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn
III. Part 2
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Today, I would like to tell you about a sincere commitment (cam kết chân thành - a genuine and serious promise) I made to my younger sister last year. The promise was to help her prepare for her university entrance exams by dedicating time every weekend to tutor her.
I made this promise because I saw how overwhelmed (choáng ngợp, quá tải - feeling stressed and unable to cope) she was with her studies and wanted to be a source of support and encouragement. Although it was quite challenging (khó khăn - difficult to do) to keep this promise because of my own busy schedule, I managed to organize my time efficiently and remain consistent.
The reason why I was determined to keep this promise was twofold. First, I wanted to bolster her confidence (tăng cường sự tự tin - to strengthen someone's belief in themselves), especially since exam pressure can be mentally exhausting. For example, after several sessions, she started improving in subjects she previously struggled with. Second, I felt a deep sense of responsibility as an elder sibling to provide guidance and motivation during such a crucial phase in her life.
In conclusion, this promise was not only about academic support but also about building a stronger bond between us, which made the effort worthwhile despite the difficulties.
New Vocabulary:
Sincere commitment (cam kết chân thành): a genuine and serious promise.
Overwhelmed (choáng ngợp, quá tải): feeling stressed or unable to manage.
Challenging (khó khăn): difficult to achieve or maintain.
Bolster her confidence (tăng cường sự tự tin): to strengthen someone's self-belief.
Source of support (nguồn hỗ trợ): a person or thing that provides help.
Mentally exhausting (mệt mỏi tinh thần): very tiring for the mind.
Crucial phase (giai đoạn quan trọng): a very important period of time.
Determined (quyết tâm): having made a firm decision and being resolved not to change it.
Consistent (kiên định): acting in the same way over time.
Synonyms and Antonyms for "Challenging":
Synonyms: demanding, tough, arduous
Antonyms: easy, simple, effortless
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ (grammar):
Although it was quite challenging to keep this promise because of my own busy schedule, I managed to organize my time efficiently and remain consistent.
Structure: Although + clause, main clause (complex sentence with concessive clause)
Vietnamese: Mặc dù việc giữ lời hứa này khá khó khăn vì lịch trình bận rộn của tôi, tôi vẫn cố gắng tổ chức thời gian hiệu quả và duy trì sự kiên định.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
The reason why I was determined to keep this promise was twofold.
Structure: cleft sentence to emphasize the reason
Vietnamese: Lý do tôi quyết tâm giữ lời hứa này là hai mặt.
IV. Part 3
1. Why do people fail to keep promises?
Some people break their promises due to poor time management (quản lý thời gian kém – the inability to organize one's schedule effectively), which leads them to overcommit.
They may genuinely intend to follow through but underestimate how much time and energy tasks require.
Another common reason is a fear of confrontation (nỗi sợ đối đầu – the avoidance of difficult or tense conversations), especially when the promise involves something emotionally difficult.
For instance, someone may promise to end a toxic relationship but postpone it because of the emotional fallout.
Additionally, people sometimes make spur-of-the-moment (bốc đồng – made suddenly without much thought) promises they cannot realistically fulfill.
This often happens in high-pressure situations (tình huống căng thẳng – moments of stress or urgency) where they want to please others.
In the long run, constantly failing to keep promises can damage one’s personal credibility (uy tín cá nhân – how trustworthy and reliable someone is perceived to be).
Therefore, it’s crucial to consider our words carefully before making any commitments.
2. Do children keep promises?
Children often do their best to keep promises, but their limited self-discipline (kỷ luật bản thân hạn chế – the lack of control over one’s actions) can get in the way.
They may be sincere in the moment, but short attention spans (khả năng tập trung ngắn – difficulty in staying focused) make it hard for them to follow through.
A child might promise to finish their homework every day, but distractions like video games can lead them astray.
Moreover, young children tend to be easily influenced (dễ bị ảnh hưởng – susceptible to peer pressure or emotional swings).
For example, a child may break a promise not to eat candy if a friend offers it.
Despite this, when properly guided, children can develop a sense of responsibility and value promises more.
Positive reinforcement and age-appropriate expectations (kỳ vọng phù hợp lứa tuổi – realistic goals for children based on their development) can help them stay true to their word.
So while children may struggle, they have the potential to become promise-keepers with the right support.
3. Do parents promise things to kids?
Yes, parents often make promises to motivate or comfort their children.
These promises range from small incentives (phần thưởng nhỏ – minor rewards or gifts) like buying ice cream to long-term commitments (cam kết dài hạn – ongoing support or major plans) such as paying for college.
Sometimes these are used as behavioral tools (công cụ hành vi – techniques to influence behavior), helping children understand the relationship between effort and reward.
For example, a parent might promise a new toy if their child gets good grades.
However, when parents break promises, it can erode trust (làm xói mòn lòng tin – gradually destroy the feeling of reliability) and cause emotional confusion.
Kids are very sensitive to consistency, and when promises aren’t fulfilled, they may feel let down or even betrayed.
To maintain a healthy parent-child bond, it’s vital that parents only make realistic and meaningful (thực tế và có ý nghĩa – achievable and purposeful) promises.
By doing so, they serve as role models and teach children the importance of integrity.
4. What promises are common?
Common promises often revolve around personal development goals (mục tiêu phát triển bản thân – objectives to improve oneself) like losing weight or quitting bad habits.
People also frequently make interpersonal commitments (cam kết giữa người với người – promises made in relationships) such as being faithful or helping a friend in need.
For instance, couples might promise to stay loyal, while colleagues may vow to support each other during tough projects.
In daily life, we also see informal agreements (thỏa thuận không chính thức – casual promises made without legal force) like returning borrowed items or showing up on time.
These promises, although small, help maintain social harmony.
Cultural traditions also play a role – for example, in some societies, wedding vows are sacred promises that are solemnly upheld (giữ một cách trang nghiêm – respected with deep seriousness).
Promises made in public or ceremonial settings tend to carry more weight.
Overall, whether big or small, promises help structure our relationships and social expectations.
5. Is it important to keep promises?
Yes, keeping promises is essential because it reflects personal integrity (chính trực cá nhân – adherence to moral and ethical principles).
People who consistently keep their word are often viewed as dependable and honorable.
This trustworthiness forms the foundation of strong relationships (nền tảng của mối quan hệ bền chặt – the essential base of meaningful connections).
In professional settings, fulfilling promises also strengthens your professional reputation (danh tiếng nghề nghiệp – how one is perceived at work).
For example, if a manager promises a promotion and delivers on it, employee morale and loyalty improve.
On the flip side, failing to honor commitments can lead to strained relationships (mối quan hệ căng thẳng – connections weakened by disappointment or distrust).
In extreme cases, people may even view broken promises as forms of betrayal.
Therefore, the ability to honor one’s word is a crucial part of building character and social credibility.
6. Do people in your country value promises?
Yes, in my country, promises are regarded as moral obligations (nghĩa vụ đạo đức – duties one feels responsible to fulfill because of conscience), especially in close-knit communities.
There’s a saying: “A man is only as good as his word,” which reflects the cultural emphasis on honesty and follow-through.
People who break promises are often seen as unreliable and untrustworthy (không đáng tin – lacking consistency and honesty).
This perception can lead to social isolation or loss of face (mất mặt – damage to one’s reputation and respectability).
In both personal and business relationships, honoring your word is a sign of maturity and respect.
For example, in rural areas, business deals often rely on verbal promises rather than contracts.
Such trust-based agreements (thỏa thuận dựa trên niềm tin – arrangements built on mutual belief in each other’s honesty) show how much promises are woven into our social fabric.
In short, promises are more than words—they’re pillars of trust and mutual respect in society.
🔍 New Vocabulary with Definitions
Poor time management – quản lý thời gian kém – inability to organize time well.
Synonyms: ineffective scheduling, disorganization, mismanagement
Antonyms: good planning, discipline, effective organization
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Some people break their promises due to poor time management."Fear of confrontation – nỗi sợ đối đầu – fear of difficult conversations or conflict.
Synonyms: conflict avoidance, social anxiety, shyness
Antonyms: assertiveness, courage, boldness
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Another common reason is a fear of confrontation."Spur-of-the-moment – bốc đồng – done without planning or thinking.
Synonyms: impulsive, spontaneous, unplanned
Antonyms: planned, deliberate, calculated
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "People sometimes make spur-of-the-moment promises."Age-appropriate expectations – kỳ vọng phù hợp lứa tuổi – realistic goals for children.
Synonyms: reasonable goals, child-friendly demands, suitable challenges
Antonyms: unrealistic expectations, excessive pressure, adult-level demands
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Positive reinforcement and age-appropriate expectations help children."Realistic and meaningful – thực tế và có ý nghĩa – achievable and worth doing.
Synonyms: attainable, relevant, purposeful
Antonyms: unrealistic, hollow, meaningless
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "It’s vital that parents make realistic and meaningful promises."
🎯 Difficult Grammar Structures with Explanations
"Despite this, when properly guided, children can develop..."
Reduced clause: “when they are properly guided” → “when properly guided”
Vietnamese translation: Dù vậy, khi được hướng dẫn đúng cách, trẻ em có thể phát triển...
"In extreme cases, people may even view broken promises as forms of betrayal."
Complex structure with conditional and modal verb
Vietnamese translation: Trong những trường hợp nghiêm trọng, người ta thậm chí có thể coi việc thất hứa là sự phản bội.
"Such trust-based agreements show how much promises are woven into our social fabric."
Passive voice with metaphor "woven into"
Vietnamese translation: Những thỏa thuận dựa trên niềm tin như vậy cho thấy lời hứa gắn bó sâu sắc với xã hội chúng ta đến mức nào.
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