Phân tích đề "Describe something you own that you want to replace" IELTS SPEAKING

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề Describe something you own that you want to replace

Describe something you own that you want to replace
You should say:

• What it is
• Where it is
• How you got it
• And explain why you want to replace it

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:

• What it is + Where it is + How you got it
  • Well, I currently own a cozy apartment nestled in the heart of the city, situated in a bustling area with all the conveniences conveniently within reach.
  • Now that I've become a parent to a beautiful baby, my priorities have shifted. The apartment, though comfortable, feels a bit cramped with all the baby gear and necessities. 
  • That's why I've been considering replacing the apartment with a spacious landed house in the city center.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
• And explain why you want to replace it
  • • Main idea 1: A landed house would offer us more room to spread out, a backyard for the little one to play in, and perhaps even a garden where we can relax and unwind. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • With a backyard, our little one would have a safe and accessible outdoor space to play and explore, fostering their physical and imaginative development while enjoying the fresh air. 
        • The possibility of having a garden adds an extra dimension to our living environment, offering a tranquil oasis where we can relax, unwind, and cultivate a connection with nature amidst the bustling city life.
    • Main idea 2: Additionally, a landed house offers the potential for customization and personalization, allowing us to create a home tailored to our family's unique preferences and lifestyle.
      • Supporting idea: This flexibility can enhance our sense of belonging and comfort, creating a truly personalized sanctuary where we can thrive and create lasting memories together.
      • Example: We might incorporate a cozy reading nook or a spacious backyard play area, fostering a love for learning and outdoor exploration from an early age. Such personalized touches would not only enhance our daily lives but also contribute to a warm and inviting atmosphere that reflects our family's values and aspirations.

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