Bên cạnh hướng dẫn CÁCH HỌC IELTS LISTENING HIỆU QUẢ, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề "Describe a successful businessperson you know (e.g. running a family business)" IELTS SPEAKING PART 2
I. Đề bài
Describe a successful businessperson you know (e.g. running a family business)
You should say:
who this person is
how you knew him/her
what business he/she does
And explain why he/she is successful.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Who this person is
- Let me tell you about my all-time favourite businessman/famous person, Bill Gates who is internationally acclaimed as one of the best known entrepreneurs of the personal computer revolution. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "favourite" tiếng anh
- How you knew this person
- I first heard of him when I was so impressed by his quote in my textbook “IF YOU ARE BORN POOR, IT’S NOT YOUR MISTAKE. BUT IF YOU DIE POOR, IT’S YOUR MISTAKE”
- What kinds of business this person does
- He is an American business investor, philanthropist, CEO & founder of Microsoft Corporation.
- And explain why you admire this person >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PARAPHRASE "I LIKE" & DIỄN TẢ "RẤT THÍCH CÁI GÌ ĐÓ"
- Main idea 1: humble personality
- Supporting idea: You can see it obviously through his simple outfits, always with plain shirts and black trousers >> He never shows off his wealth or even talks much about his achievements >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "esteem" trong tiếng anh
- Main idea 2: talented
- Supporting idea: As a matter of fact, Bill Gate founded Microsoft - the world's largest personal computer software company, at just 20 years of age, which I think is absolutely incredible for a young man. (Not many people of this age are willing to drop out of school, start their own enterprise and are able to make a name for themselves) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & Word form của "enterprise"
- Main idea 1: humble personality
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Today, I would like to tell you about my all-time favourite businessman, Bill Gates, who is internationally acclaimed (được ca ngợi trên toàn thế giới – widely praised and recognized across countries) as one of the most influential entrepreneurs of the personal computer revolution. He is not only a visionary leader (nhà lãnh đạo có tầm nhìn – someone with the ability to plan the future with imagination and wisdom) but also a philanthropist who has contributed immensely to global development.
I first came to know about him when I was still in high school, reading a powerful quote in my textbook: “If you are born poor, it’s not your mistake. But if you die poor, it’s your mistake.” That statement struck me deeply because it embodies a hard-hitting truth (sự thật gây ấn tượng mạnh – a reality that makes people think seriously) about taking responsibility for one’s own future. Since then, I have followed his journey closely through books, interviews, and documentaries.
Bill Gates is the co-founder of Microsoft Corporation, the world’s largest personal computer software company. His entrepreneurial spirit turned a small garage project into a multi-billion-dollar empire (đế chế hàng tỷ đô – a vast and powerful business organization) that revolutionized modern technology. At the age of 20, he made the bold decision to drop out of Harvard and pursue his vision, which was a game-changing move (nước đi thay đổi cục diện – a decision that alters the situation dramatically) in the technology industry.
What I admire most about him is his humble demeanor (phong thái khiêm nhường – modest and unpretentious behaviour) despite his enormous wealth. He is often seen in simple, plain outfits like sweaters and black trousers, and he rarely boasts about his fortune. This down-to-earth attitude makes him stand out in a world where many wealthy figures flaunt their status.
Another reason for his success is his extraordinary talent and perseverance. Creating Microsoft at such a young age required not only intelligence but also sheer determination (sự quyết tâm mãnh liệt – great mental strength to keep going despite difficulties). His work ethic and ability to seize opportunities are truly inspiring. Moreover, his trailblazing innovations (những đổi mới tiên phong – groundbreaking new ideas) in computer software have reshaped how billions of people live and work today.
To sum up, Bill Gates is not just a successful businessman but also a role model. His combination of humility, talent, and relentless drive makes him a household name (tên quen thuộc – a well-known and familiar person) and an inspiration for generations worldwide.
New Vocabulary with Synonyms & Antonyms (from essay)
internationally acclaimed (được ca ngợi trên toàn thế giới – widely praised and recognized across countries)
Synonyms: world-renowned, globally celebrated, universally recognized
Antonyms: unknown, obscure, unacknowledged
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Bill Gates, who is internationally acclaimed as one of the most influential entrepreneurs…"
visionary leader (nhà lãnh đạo có tầm nhìn – someone with the ability to plan the future with imagination and wisdom)
Synonyms: forward-thinking leader, innovative leader, pioneering leader
Antonyms: short-sighted leader, narrow-minded leader, unimaginative leader
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "He is not only a visionary leader but also a philanthropist…"
hard-hitting truth (sự thật gây ấn tượng mạnh – a reality that makes people think seriously)
Synonyms: stark reality, bitter truth, harsh fact
Antonyms: comforting lie, sugar-coated story, illusion
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "That statement struck me deeply because it embodies a hard-hitting truth…"
multi-billion-dollar empire (đế chế hàng tỷ đô – a vast and powerful business organization)
Synonyms: corporate giant, business empire, conglomerate
Antonyms: small firm, modest company, startup
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "He turned a small garage project into a multi-billion-dollar empire…"
game-changing move (nước đi thay đổi cục diện – a decision that alters the situation dramatically)
Synonyms: revolutionary step, transformative decision, groundbreaking action
Antonyms: insignificant act, trivial step, minor change
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Dropping out of Harvard was a game-changing move in the technology industry."
humble demeanor (phong thái khiêm nhường – modest and unpretentious behaviour)
Synonyms: modest attitude, unassuming manner, down-to-earth nature
Antonyms: arrogant attitude, conceited manner, boastful behaviour
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "What I admire most about him is his humble demeanor despite his enormous wealth."
sheer determination (sự quyết tâm mãnh liệt – great mental strength to keep going despite difficulties)
Synonyms: strong resolve, unwavering commitment, relentless perseverance
Antonyms: weak will, lack of resolve, indecisiveness
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Creating Microsoft at such a young age required not only intelligence but also sheer determination."
trailblazing innovations (những đổi mới tiên phong – groundbreaking new ideas)
Synonyms: pioneering ideas, cutting-edge innovations, groundbreaking developments
Antonyms: outdated methods, stagnant practices, old-fashioned ideas
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "His trailblazing innovations in computer software have reshaped how billions live and work today."

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