Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề Describe a place you visited that has been affected by air pollution (or not clean)
I. Đề bài
Describe a place you visited that has been affected by air pollution (or not clean)
You should say:
- Where it is
- When you visited this place
- What kinds of pollution you saw there
- And explain how this place was affected
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:
Where it is + When you visited this place
I would like to share with you a situation when I visited a famous tourist destination but was disappointed to see plastic waste there.
(IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: I’d like to share with you a time I saw plastic waste piling up on a beach)
…. This is a world-renowned tourist attraction point where people often go for vacations and water sports.
What kinds of pollution you saw there
We felt terrible as there was loads of litter here and there especially when we approached the river where the water sports activities had been done.
And explain how this place was affected
Main idea 1: The main reason for this problem is many tourists visit this place every day and often carry packed food and water bottles and dump these things carelessly.
Supporting idea: I never imagined the beach on the paradisiacal island should feature not shells, but rather, plastic trash.
Main idea 2: The second main reason I got to know from the local is that there are no plastic recycling plants nearby, so it is a big issue how to dump all the litter.
Supporting idea: Although it is a popular tourist place, I was shocked to see there was no rule and regulation in terms of the cleaning process.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
I'd like to recount a recent visit to a renowned tourist destination that left me disheartened due to the extensive presence of plastic waste. The place I'm referring to is a globally acclaimed spot frequented by vacationers and water sports enthusiasts.
It was during a trip last summer that I had the opportunity to visit this location. The moment we arrived, I was immediately struck by the sheer beauty of the surroundings. However, as we ventured closer to the river where water activities took place, my initial awe quickly turned to disappointment.
The types of pollution we encountered ranged from plastic bags and bottles to various other discarded items. It was disheartening to witness such negligence towards the environment in a place that should have been a haven of natural beauty.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
Upon further inquiry, I learned about the underlying causes contributing to this environmental degradation. Firstly, the influx of tourists who visit this destination daily is a major factor. Many of these visitors come prepared with packed food and water bottles, which they often dispose of carelessly, exacerbating the pollution problem.
Moreover, it became apparent that the lack of nearby recycling facilities compounded the issue. Without proper infrastructure in place for waste management, the accumulation of plastic waste becomes an insurmountable challenge.
IV. Part 3.
1. Identify the most common types of pollution where you live
One of the most widespread issues is air contamination (air contamination – English: polluted air; Vietnamese: ô nhiễm không khí) due to the relentless use of fossil fuels for transportation, especially during peak-hour traffic (peak-hour traffic – English: rush-hour congestion; Vietnamese: giờ cao điểm đông đúc), which chokes the streets of major cities.
Another common problem is plastic waste (plastic waste – English: discarded plastic materials; Vietnamese: rác thải nhựa) that clogs rivers and drainage systems, leading to frequent flooding during monsoon seasons.
2. Speculate on whether there will be more or less pollution and rubbish in the future
There might be an upward trajectory (an upward trajectory – English: increasing trend; Vietnamese: xu hướng tăng lên) in pollution levels if consumerism keeps growing unchecked, as people continue to buy single-use products (single-use products – English: disposable items used once; Vietnamese: sản phẩm dùng một lần), contributing to landfills.
However, with the increasing popularity of eco-conscious lifestyles (eco-conscious lifestyles – English: environmentally aware habits; Vietnamese: lối sống thân thiện với môi trường), younger generations may reverse this trend by adopting sustainable consumption habits.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
3. Consider whether there is more pollution and rubbish today than in the past
Nowadays, pollution has become more pervasive (pervasive – English: spreading widely; Vietnamese: lan rộng) than ever before, largely due to urbanization and overpopulation, which weren’t as pronounced a few decades ago.
In contrast, the past saw fewer industrial emissions (industrial emissions – English: gases or waste from factories; Vietnamese: khí thải công nghiệp) because most communities lived in self-sufficient rural settings, relying more on natural resources than mass production.
🌱 New Vocabulary & Explanation
Air contamination – ô nhiễm không khí (English: polluted air from harmful particles)
Synonyms: air pollution, toxic air, smog
Antonyms: clean air, fresh breeze, unpolluted atmosphere
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "One of the most widespread issues is air contamination due to the relentless use of fossil fuels."
Peak-hour traffic – giờ cao điểm đông đúc (English: high-congestion time on roads)
Synonyms: rush-hour congestion, traffic jam, heavy traffic
Antonyms: free-flow traffic, empty roads, smooth traffic
Plastic waste – rác thải nhựa (English: discarded plastic items)
Synonyms: plastic debris, plastic garbage, non-biodegradable waste
Antonyms: biodegradable waste, organic waste, reusable materials
An upward trajectory – xu hướng tăng lên (English: a rising trend)
Synonyms: growth trend, escalation, increase
Antonyms: decline, decrease, downward spiral
Single-use products – sản phẩm dùng một lần
Synonyms: disposables, throwaway items, one-time-use products
Antonyms: reusable goods, durable items, sustainable products
Eco-conscious lifestyles – lối sống thân thiện với môi trường
Synonyms: green living, sustainable lifestyle, environmentally friendly habits
Antonyms: wasteful lifestyle, unsustainable habits, careless consumption
Pervasive – lan rộng (English: present or spreading widely)
Synonyms: widespread, prevalent, extensive
Antonyms: limited, rare, contained
Industrial emissions – khí thải công nghiệp
Synonyms: factory fumes, industrial waste gases, smokestack pollution
Antonyms: clean energy output, filtered air, green energy sources
📚 Difficult Grammar Structures & Translation
“If consumerism keeps growing unchecked, pollution levels might rise.”
Conditional sentence (Type 1)
→ Nếu chủ nghĩa tiêu dùng tiếp tục phát triển mà không được kiểm soát, mức độ ô nhiễm có thể sẽ tăng lên.
“Which weren’t as pronounced a few decades ago.”
Reduced relative clause
→ Điều này không rõ rệt như vài thập kỷ trước.
“With the increasing popularity of eco-conscious lifestyles, younger generations may reverse this trend.”
Introductory “with” phrase + complex sentence
→ Với sự phổ biến ngày càng tăng của lối sống thân thiện môi trường, thế hệ trẻ có thể đảo ngược xu hướng này.
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