Phân tích đề "Describe an important achievement you have made" IELTS SPEAKING

· Part 2

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề "Describe an important achievement you have made" IELTS SPEAKING

I. Đề bài

Describe an important achievement you have made
You should say:

  • What you achieved
  • When and where you did it
  • Why it was an important achievement
  • And explain how you earned it

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:

  • What you achieved
    • One of the most significant achievements in my life was building a full house in the bustling city center of Danang, Vietnam, in 2024.
  • When and where you did it
    • This accomplishment took place over the course of several months, starting in early 2024 and completing by mid-year. 
    • Danang, known for its vibrant culture and rapid development, provided the perfect backdrop for such an endeavor.
  • Explain how you earned it
    • Earning this achievement was no easy feat. 
    • It required a combination of financial investment, careful planning, and effective project management. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • I had to collaborate with architects, engineers, contractors, and various other professionals to ensure that every aspect of the construction was executed flawlessly.
  • Why it was an important achievement
    • Constructing a house in the heart of Danang was a pivotal achievement for several reasons. 
      • Main idea 1: Firstly, it marked a significant milestone in my personal and professional growth. 
        • Supporting idea: Building a house from the ground up required meticulous planning, coordination, and dedication, and seeing the project come to fruition was immensely rewarding.
      • Main idea 2: Moreover, the location of the house in the city center added to its importance. 
        • Supporting idea:
          • Being situated in such a prime location not only provided convenience but also enhanced the value of the property. 
          • It was a testament to my ability to make strategic decisions and investments.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

One of the most significant achievements in my life was building a full house in the bustling city center of Danang, Vietnam, in 2024.

This accomplishment took place over the course of several months, starting in early 2024 and completing by mid-year. Danang, known for its vibrant culture and rapid development, provided the perfect backdrop for such an endeavor.

Earning this achievement was no easy feat. It required a combination of financial investment, careful planning, and effective project management. I had to collaborate with architects, engineers, contractors, and various other professionals to ensure that every aspect of the construction was executed flawlessly.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing

Constructing a house in the heart of Danang was a pivotal achievement for several reasons. Firstly, it marked a significant milestone in my personal and professional growth. Building a house from the ground up required meticulous planning, coordination, and dedication, and seeing the project come to fruition was immensely rewarding.

Moreover, the location of the house in the city center added to its importance. Being situated in such a prime location not only provided convenience but also enhanced the value of the property. It was a testament to my ability to make strategic decisions and investments.

Overall, building a full house in the city center of Danang in 2024 stands out as one of my most important achievements. It represents my perseverance, determination, and capability to turn dreams into reality through hard work and strategic planning.

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