Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề Describe a noisy place you have been to
I. Đề bài
Describe a noisy place you have been to
You should say:
What it is
When you wnet there
What you did there
And explain why you feel it’s a noisy place
II. Kiến thức liên quan
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III. Phân tích
1. Bài tham khảo số 1
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:
- What it is
- I’m going to talk about when my neighbour made a lot of noise when he renovated his house a few months ago >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "ago, for, before" tiếng anh
- When you went there + What you did there
- It’s my home, so I stayed there nearly all the time
- The noise of the drills, hammers and other power tools during the daytime was really annoying (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: When I stay at home, I can hear the construction noise like the hammer banging, the drilling sounds, very irritating)
- During this time I felt extremely exhausted and I really wanted to make a complaint so that my neighbour would take some actions but his house renovations were legal so there was nothing I could do
- And explain why you feel it’s a noisy place
- Main idea 1: Hearing the noise all the time drove me crazy, and had quite a negative impact on my work.
- Supporting idea: Sometimes I was sleepless all night >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic SLEEP IELTS SPEAKING
- Main idea 2: These impacts contributed to my negative mental, physical and behavioral manifestations.
- Supporting idea: In this noisy environment, I got more easily annoyed and became more prone to losing their temper >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Cách dùng từ "environment" tiếng anh
- Main idea 1: Hearing the noise all the time drove me crazy, and had quite a negative impact on my work.
2. Bài tham khảo số 2
Bài soạn được chỉnh sửa từ nội dung bài brainstorm của HS lớp IELTS SPEAKING ONLINE 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR:
Describe a noisy place you have been to
- What it is
- During my trip to my hometown on Tet Holiday, there was a place that left a lasting impression of noise in my memory – my neighbor's house, where they often had karaoke sessions.
- When you went there
- Last January, my family and I visited my hometown to celebrate Tet Holiday, a special time for relaxation and cherishing moments with our loved ones. As part of our trip, we decided to visit our grandparents and spend time together.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- And explain why you feel it’s a noisy place
- There are numerous reasons for why I perceive it as a noisy location.
- FIRSTLY, while we were sleeping, we were suddenly awoken by the booming sound of karaoke coming from their house. Initially, I hoped they would sing for a short while and stop before 10 p.m., but to my disappointment, they continued non-stop. They even sang the same song, "Gánh Mẹ," louder and louder.
- SECONDLY, Feeling increasingly agitated, I couldn't remain composed any longer, so we decided to visit their house and express our complaints about the disturbance. Thankfully, they understood our concerns and adjusted the volume, making it more bearable for everyone in the neighborhood.
- There are numerous reasons for why I perceive it as a noisy location.
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