Phân tích đề "Describe a new development in the area where you live (e.g shopping mall, park,...)" IELTS SPEAKING

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề Describe a new development in the area where you live (e.g shopping mall, park,...)

Describe a new development in the area where you live (e.g shopping mall, park,...)
You should say:

• What the development is
• When/where you noticed it
• How long it took to complete it
• And explain how you feel about it

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý bám sát vào các câu hỏi cue card của IELTS TUTOR để bố cục bài nói nhé:

• What the development is
  • This mall is known as ….. which is situated in …., a capital city of …..with more than 100 shops and restaurants.  
• When/where you noticed it
  • It looks more like a ‘corn’. Therefore, given its distinctive design, this building really stands out from all the buildings in town. My first impression of the interior of the building was that it was really clean and spacious with so many fully furnished office units and rooms for meetings.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Housing & Architecture IELTS
• How long it took to complete it
  • The construction began in 2015, and it completed in 2018
• And explain how you feel about it
  • Main idea 1:  I liked the admirable design concept of the shops and I really enjoyed my shopping there. 
    • Supporting idea:  My experience in this shopping mall was quite pleasant and that’s why I would say that the …. shopping mall would an excellent choice for shopping.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "experience" tiếng anh
    • Example: 
  • Main idea 2:  It has something for everyone, from kids to older people can find ample activities to pass their time.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • The ground floor has huge space for the senior citizen to stroll around.
      • There are numerous cinema halls for middle-age people.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "experience" và "experiences" tiếng anh
      • The top floor is specially dedicated to children's activity with indoor games and many more educational and adventures activities. 

Bài soạn được chỉnh sửa từ nội dung bài brainstorm của HS lớp IELTS SPEAKING ONLINE 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR:

Describe a new development in the area where you live (e.g shopping
mall, park…)

• What the development is
  • The new development that has recently been built near my neighborhood is a trendy shopping mall dedicated to clothing.
• When/where you noticed it
  • I first noticed the shopping mall while I was attending an extra class with my friends. 
  • As soon as I stepped out of the shop, I was immediately captivated by its vibrant appearance and the sheer size of the building. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
• How long it took to complete it
  • The construction of the shopping mall took approximately two years to complete. 
  • It was an ambitious project that involved a wide range of shops catering to different clothing sectors, ensuring that there would be something for every customer's taste and needs.
• And explain how you feel about it
  • I am thrilled about this addition to the area FOR MANY REASONS 
    • FIRSTLY, it offers convenient shopping options and a variety of fashionable choices for both residents and visitors. In other words, the mall has become a go-to place for both locals and visitors who are eager to explore the latest fashion trends and find unique styles.
    • SECONDLY, It adds a fresh dimension to the local retail scene and provides us with more diverse options for our clothing needs. I appreciate that we no longer have to travel far to find fashionable attire and that we can easily shop within our neighborhood, saving time for other activities. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The latest addition to my neighborhood that has been the talk of the town is a chic shopping mall solely dedicated to clothing enthusiasts. I stumbled upon this captivating establishment while out with friends during an extra class session. Stepping out of a nearby shop, my attention was instantly drawn to its vibrant facade and the imposing size of the structure.

The journey from its inception to completion spanned approximately two years. Witnessing its evolution was a testament to the ambitious endeavor it represented. The culmination of this project was a sprawling complex encompassing a plethora of shops catering to various segments of the clothing industry. From high-street brands to boutique labels, the mall promised something to satiate every shopper's desire.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

Personally, I couldn't contain my excitement about this new development for several reasons. Foremost, it revolutionized the shopping experience for both residents and visitors alike. The convenience it offered, coupled with an extensive array of fashionable choices, made it an instant hit among fashion enthusiasts. Gone were the days of arduous journeys to distant shopping districts; now, the latest trends were just a stone's throw away.

Moreover, the arrival of this shopping haven injected a fresh vibrancy into our local retail landscape. It ushered in a new era of diversity, providing us with an eclectic mix of options for our sartorial needs. No longer constrained by limited choices, we were empowered to express our individuality through fashion without compromise.

In essence, the unveiling of this trendy shopping mall marks a significant milestone for our community. It not only elevates our shopping experience but also serves as a catalyst for fostering a sense of pride and belonging. As I eagerly anticipate exploring its offerings further, I am filled with optimism about the transformative impact it will have on our neighborhood.

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